This Poem received a lot of positive feedback so Thank you for all the likes and comments ..I’m feeling the love
From One Artist to Another thank you all ,blogging World means so much…
For https://mutafariqkhayalat.wordpress.com/ who invited me to do this .I’m not good at these kinds of things such as:links and tech savvy stuff.. Thank you
When I grow up I’ll fly…
with silver cufflinks
chained to the free
engaged for their own sacred prosperity.
When I grow up no need for money man against man
One toward the penny the other toward the land
Rigid cold,freezing
Broken legs ,so learned to fly
Taking to the bitter dirt
I moved sluggishly on my stubby joints
Parting the mud between
the soul and body
when I grow up
I’ll fly ….
Thanks everyone the most comments on this poem.I’ll Fly, so much love…
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I really enjoyed this, especially the lines, “with silver cufflinks/ chained to the free/ engaged for their own sacred prosperity.” Great job!
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thank you Jennis5309
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Lovely!
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thank you sameernahar
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broken legs, learned to fly…..puts me in mind of the character Charlotte in the book The Invention of Wings by Sue Monk Kidd. A strong woman, “everything she knew came from living on the scarce side of mercy.” Love your poetry. 🙂
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thank you love your work as well, haven’t heard of Sue Monk Kidd,
I’ll look her up thanks again…
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“Parting the mud between the soul and body…” Perfect. I can feel this one. Thanks.
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thanks jjz3
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