Day (1) Sunrise (Napowrimo

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Perhaps the day never breaks,

and night remained king,

Surely we’d scurry about,

in twilight hoping

But suppose our souls wern’t worth saving,

Ah-then

Sunrise,

would be everything

18 thoughts on “Day (1) Sunrise (Napowrimo”

rhcwilliams April 2, 2015 at 2:59 am

This is a poem and a tiny novel at the same time! Love it.

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1. kneal1 Post authorApril 2, 2015 at 3:00 am
  
  thank you Rchwilliams
  
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  1. rhcwilliams April 2, 2015 at 3:06 am
    
    A pleasure, kneal1! You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it! Peace & Blessings, Ruth 🙂
    
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  2. kneal1 Post authorApril 2, 2015 at 3:10 am
    
    Thanks Ruth, amazing blog ,you’ve been here a while, I could learn a few things from you, hope to stay connected…Many blessings Krissy…
    
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  3. rhcwilliams April 2, 2015 at 3:14 am
    
    You’re so kind, Krissy, but I think you’ve got this inspired poetry thing locked down pretty tight already! I follow a lot of poets, but you’re one of my favorites. Keep in touch! Take care, Ruth
    
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  4. kneal1 Post authorApril 2, 2015 at 3:18 am
    
    so sweet,I’m all smiles – makes my day…
    
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kneal1 Post authorApril 2, 2015 at 4:23 am

Reblogged this on Mother Bethel Poetry Ministry.

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1. kneal1 Post authorApril 3, 2015 at 4:03 am
  
  wow very amazing blog you have…
  
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Fatmawaty April 3, 2015 at 5:37 am

You’re a great poet sis kneal! You should tell us about your creative writing process, next Monday! 😍
Can’t wait to read yours!
Much loves for you! 💗

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1. kneal1 Post authorApril 3, 2015 at 5:59 am
  
  Thank you its in the making for sure..much love my sister…
  
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  1. Fatmawaty April 3, 2015 at 6:09 am
    
    Don’t mention it, dear sis! Wow it’d be great!
    You will post it for us, right? Rosalyn n I have chosen you!
    Thank you for loving me! 💗
    
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  2. kneal1 Post authorApril 3, 2015 at 6:27 am
    
    I see, indeed and it is truly an honor to have such wonderful talented writers such as you (Fatmawaty and Rosalyn) choose me so you I’m feeling the love thank you sis…
    
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  3. Fatmawaty April 3, 2015 at 7:21 am
    
    You made my day, dear sis! your great word is prayer for me, I hope a few times later I’ll be a good writer like you! Ameen! I too! I love you, I love Rosalyn and all great friends here! WordPress is our world! 😉
    
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  4. kneal1 Post authorApril 3, 2015 at 1:08 pm
    
    you already are Ameen (Ah-woman)…( there is something inside so strong,we got this) For all those who have come before us…much love to you..I love you my sis..
    
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  5. Fatmawaty April 4, 2015 at 5:01 am
    
    he..he, you made me smile, Sis! 🙂 Love you more! ❤
    
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loristrawn April 23, 2015 at 8:09 pm

This poem knocked me out cold. Wow!

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1. kneal1 Post authorApril 23, 2015 at 9:11 pm
  
  love your words, laughing right now…thank you for this…Loristrawn
  
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