April 2, 2015April 2, 2015 by Visionariekind

Lightning Bugs (Day2) Napowrimo

Dangerously happy,

flying with fireflies

And fiery-winds,

Soaring above,Sun’s mindful speed

Beyond thee anchored

wine stained doors

pass that “Great Abyss”

If ever I could hold one prickly round star

but for a moment,

touch a holy-thing.

23 thoughts on “Lightning Bugs (Day2) Napowrimo”

Saneh Pandey says:

April 2, 2015 at 3:51 pm

Your poem is as wonderful as fireflies 🙂

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 2, 2015 at 3:53 pm
  
  Ah-too kind to me, I’m all smiles, thank you and I enjoy your work very much… Saneh Pandey
  
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  1. Saneh Pandey says:
    
    April 2, 2015 at 5:08 pm
    
    Thanks to you too dear 🙂 ❤
impostorpawn says:

April 2, 2015 at 6:05 pm

nice

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 2, 2015 at 6:16 pm
  
  thank you
  
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charlenedelfin says:

April 2, 2015 at 10:14 pm

Beautiful poem. It makes the reader feel like she’s also flying with fireflies. 🙂

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 3, 2015 at 3:47 am
  
  thank you Charlendelfin
  
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Kiana says:

April 3, 2015 at 12:59 am

Yes, very lovely poem indeed. #LoveandInk

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 3, 2015 at 3:46 am
  
  thank you so much Kiana I be sure to visit your page..
  
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zikaolofin says:

April 3, 2015 at 5:22 am

Wow. Didn’t know Napowrimo has started how do I get on the train? Hope I’m not too late.

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 3, 2015 at 5:32 am
  
  you are not late, please join in, I’ll link to you the site for Napowrimo http://www.napowrimo.net/about/ you submit your blog site and start posting immedatily also reading the promts helps to get through the 30 day many blessings to you my fellow poet I’ll be sure to check out more of you’re work I know its gonna be awesome…Many blessings
  
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  1. zikaolofin says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 6:14 am
    
    Thanks so much. Tried already to link my site but not succeeding. How do I get the prompts?
  2. kneal1 says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 6:25 am
    
    okay click here scroll down and see day 2 prompt keeping going down to see day 1 http://www.napowrimo.net/
  3. zikaolofin says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 6:27 am
    
    Ok. Thanks a lot. Really appreciate your help.
  4. kneal1 says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 6:29 am
    
    okay let me know if you find the prompts and try again to go to submit your site and copy and page your wordpress address into the required spaces
  5. zikaolofin says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 7:09 am
    
    Ok. Will do. Already found the prompts. Will try resubmit my site.Thanks
  6. kneal1 says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 6:34 am
    
    check National poetry writing month on Facebook as well for the prompts and follow..I hope this helps I felt the same way last year when I wanted to participate so don’t feel late or behind just start what ever day we are on and enjoy the poetry and enjoy all spring brings I think you are a wonderful writer..
  7. zikaolofin says:
    
    April 3, 2015 at 7:10 am
    
    Aww. Thank you sis. You’re a blessing.
2. kneal1 says:
  
  April 3, 2015 at 5:34 am
  
  also Zika clink on the top of the site that says 30 poems in 30 days for the daily post… http://www.napowrimo.net/about/
  
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susanissima says:

April 4, 2015 at 1:48 pm

Beautifully written! I adore, especially, your last stanza!

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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 4, 2015 at 3:25 pm
  
  Thank you Susanissima
  
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1. kneal1 says:
  
  April 5, 2015 at 12:55 pm
  
  Thankyou for including me I think you are one amazing writer
  
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