
come on in dear soul
tip-away, the pointy shoes of your sole,
slip on these plushy comfortable(s)
let this be a great exchange, (soft note)
our bluesy screams, bend notes while fading
arrange every high-low,
if there’s still a howl in you, unintending,
swallow the breathless mountain, fill the holes
unburdened wholeheartedly
my syrupy- dreams gotta run, but sit in the note
falsetto’s gotta blow
come back tomorrow,
there will be
jazz and gladness
salt of the music
sits quietly in the moonlight
I love the ebb and flow of music caressing through your verses girlfriend. How tranquil and spiritual! ππΌπ€ππ₯°ππΌ
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thank you girlfriend always so kind πππππππ
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beautiful words and the video as well
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thank you πππππ
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Lovely piece Queen.
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thank you kindly Kiana Donae πππππ
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This is gorgeous! π·πΆ Love this!
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thank you Michele Lee ππππ
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O my goodness — the metaphors just move and evolve like waves breaking on a shore!
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beautiful words thank you Maren πππππ
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This is beautiful, Krissy. I love the way the words flow into each other from line to line. I also love the video (lovely to hear this poem spoken – is that you who is speaking in it?). The image at the top is gorgeous as well. Ellie xx β€ β€ β€
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